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            <title><![CDATA[Fixing My Worst Fanfiction - A Critical Analysis - Realistic Cartoon Horses]]></title>
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            <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I actually got something wrong. The storm isn't a plot hole. However, it is still a contrivance, because Scarletshy controls the sky, and proceeds to do nothing with it after Shadow gets an edge on her.</p>
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